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No Tomorrow - New Demo

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« on: December 21, 2017, 08:55:06 AM »

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« Reply #1 on: December 21, 2017, 09:02:49 AM »
nice demo
reminds me a bit of oasis (on a good day)

The words and melody are lovely.
this could become an awesome song.
It's either this or that, then again it might be the other. 

I can promise you a future of slow decline.

Don't eat the yellow snow

And there you have it. 

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« Reply #2 on: December 21, 2017, 09:12:32 AM »
Hi Guys - I know you're new here and keen but you're only allowed to post one song in the finished songs section every two weeks  :( I know, I know, we've all been over eager  :)

Also, You'll find that you get some reviews if you start reviewing some of the other songs on the forum. It's a two way street man  :)

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sabre

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« Reply #3 on: December 22, 2017, 08:53:43 AM »
Thanks man for the listen - it's appreciated! Yeah we feel the song has real potential if/when we can get in a studio to record it professionally. Working towards getting the money together! Thanks again for taking the time to listen  :)

Lee

nice demo
reminds me a bit of oasis (on a good day)

The words and melody are lovely.
this could become an awesome song.


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« Reply #4 on: December 22, 2017, 08:54:43 AM »
Sorry, we didn't realise! We will hold back from now on as we respect your policies. All the best.

Lee

Hi Guys - I know you're new here and keen but you're only allowed to post one song in the finished songs section every two weeks  :( I know, I know, we've all been over eager  :)

Also, You'll find that you get some reviews if you start reviewing some of the other songs on the forum. It's a two way street man  :)

Cheers

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« Reply #5 on: December 22, 2017, 10:28:21 AM »
Welcome to the Forum Sabre. I like the song but think the chorus needs a bit more oomph to make it stand out more. The extra oomph could be volume or perhaps an additional instrument. If you disagree feel free to ignore me.

Look forward to reading some of your reviews.

Keith

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« Reply #6 on: December 23, 2017, 08:55:27 AM »
This is  good song with a lot of potential, although pretty good as it is! I would agree with the comment to boost the chorus, possibly even with a lot of backing vocal chanting the chorus? Any way, best of luck with it.