Neat playing and tidy music in general. The drums are particularly tight, the bass solid, and the guitars well played too.
The vocals are heavily effect-laden, (in my opinion too much so) and a tad too low in the mix. It is hard to judge the character of the vocal due the all the effects.
It feels like this track is more about the sounds than the song. There is little melodically that grabs me despite a few repeated phrases in there. I am typing moments after listening and I can't recall anything other than the "Woomaaan" on the downward vocal bend. The chorus vocal seems like it may have a strong melody but it half hidden from us by all the production trickery.
I am concerned that a bit too much has gone into the editing here and killed the life of the song. Less is often more as the motto goes. The heavy use of forward-in-the-mix delay is a particular offender here; it's a dance music trait that is sits a little uncomfortably for me in this mix. Covering the gaps with repeating words with no diminishing volume has made a song with little dark and light; it all sits on one level vocally.
Listening closer the vocal has an odd timbre; its kind of Bob Dylan in its stretched vowels, crossed with Liam Gallager, all pitched up half an octave to a high tenor. I can't tell whether I like it; again, this is because of mixing choices
Regardless it all sounds well done for a home recording and you have a great handle on mixing levels between bass drums and guitar. Song wise this doesn't do much for me. I'd focus your energy on the writing now you have a decent handle on production.
