Nice little song, Pauly. I really like the first verse, the lyrics, melody and the singing and the arrangement/feel, and the first chorus - fine juxtaposition between the two (verse and chorus), and that one line chorus expanded nicely into a Beatles-ish moment. It's a neat way of using the title Simply Delicious, too. The second half of the song lost me a little - I think the layering of the vocals worked against the feel (for me) - although I get why you wanted to do that. Some lovely rhymes in the second half, too, as well, so it's by no means a "no" from me, its just I liked the first half so much. But as for the actual song - great idea, and super lyrics, and some great rhymes and rhythms, and the melody and first chorus really work for me, too.
Derek