[Reece!]

Last song for a while!

The rain clouds are moving in my direction
I can feel the storm, its on its way
No matter what I do or even say
I just can't shake this pain away
And it's all because of you
I'm left here stranded with nothing to do
And I want to, I want to just leave
Get my one way ticket out of here
Now I know I got to, I got to
Just stay away for as long as I can

(Chorus)
In the I'm sick of this pain
Bringing me down each and everyday
Believe me I've tried to walk away
Why I'm the one who has to pay
I wish everyday was a walk in the park
Well my life's just trapped in the dark
Everyday gets worse and I feel
Like that I am just giving in
But I can't give the satisfaction of winning
This is my life every single day

I work so hard and get no thanks
Sometimes that's all I need to keep me going
But now I'm in it way to deep
And I just can't dig my way out of it
Why am I the one dealing with this shit
I just want a normal happy life
But is that to much to even ask?
And I want to, I want to just leave
Get my one way ticket out of here
Now I know I got to, I got to
Just stay away for as long as I can

(Chorus)
In the I'm sick of this pain
Bringing me down each and everyday
Believe me I've tried to walk away
Why I'm the one who has to pay
I wish everyday was a walk in the park
Well my life's just trapped in the dark
Everyday gets worse and I feel
Like that I am just giving in
But I can't give the satisfaction of winning
This is my life every single day

Woah everyday, everyday, everyday
Just always seems to get worse
I want this chapter of my life over
Where is my chance of leaving here
Everytime I do you just pull me back
Woah everyday, everyday, everyday

(Chorus)
In the I'm sick of this pain
Bringing me down each and everyday
Believe me I've tried to walk away
Why I'm the one who has to pay
I wish everyday was a walk in the park
Well my life's just trapped in the dark
Everyday gets worse and I feel
Like that I am just giving in
But I can't give the satisfaction of winning
This is my life every single day
Why I'm the one who has to pay
I wish everyday was a walk in the park
Well my life's just trapped in the dark

[BooBoo]

This is a song that a lot of people will be able to relate to so well done on that! I think the first two lines of the song are really good and my favourite!

[Peppermint]

I Have to agree with BooBoo the first two lines are really good.  

[PeeJay]

Hi,

I thought this was a little bit too long IMHO.

Also the chorus and the verses are similar in content. Maybe try and make the chorus a bit punchier and trim out the lines where you are saying the same sort of thing.

You've got the emotion there though!

Nice one,

Phil.

[Saeed AlSuri]

Felt the trapped felling of the guy .. in his relationship ..

I agree with PeeJay .. tighter chorus .. will make it super ..

couldn't understand the use of  " In the I am .." bit in the beginning of the chorus ..

Cheers ..

[benjo]

hey,

very long read this almost put me off to be honest,
but i'm glad I read it, good on emotion some great lines in there
I agree with booboo they were my favourite too, well done  tony...