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What Butterflies Can Do
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April 19, 2019, 11:31:18 AM »
Hi,
This is a beautiful, simple, elegant love song. Lovely guitar and strings, super melody and a sweet vocal. Maybe a little more weight to the vocal would improve it but other than that, a gem of a song.
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April 19, 2019, 12:57:17 PM »
Great strings in the song.
Lovely melody and heartfelt.
A enjoyable and warming listen
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April 19, 2019, 04:29:32 PM »
Thanks Sandeep
@montydog
I understand what you mean about the vocal. I chose to leave it that way though as i wanted it to sound like i just picked up the guitar and was singing it (to the woman it's about). It's supposed to sound kinda nervous. But maybe i should just re-record it.
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April 19, 2019, 04:39:56 PM »
Blimey
What a sweet voice you have!.
lovely choice of instruments.
quite simple and effortlessly gets to the point.
I can't suggest any changes in the production.
keeping it simple was the best choice. Very effective.
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