Hey all!
Just finishing up this track and would love to get some feedback. I'm calling it either Sometimes or Sometime I Get Lonely in Your Love. It seems very long. But I would love to get overall feedback on production, lyrics, melody, the whole nine yards. Thanks so much!
Micky
https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/sometimes-11-20-2/s-2nfSbLyrics:
I've been here before
It's the same old same old up and down
I've been here before
Waiting for you
To come around
'Round here we don't talk about it
We don't talk about it
We don't talk about our love
Sometimes in life
You've gotta move on
Sometimes you think it's the right one
Even when it's wrong
Chorus:
Every day I keep waiting for tomorrow
When the sun will shine and no more pills to swallow
And it's good when it's good
When it's bad I've had enough
Sometimes I get lonely in your love
I pull away but you pull me back closer
I think I'm addicted to being your shoulder
And you're good when you're good
And that makes it so tough
Cuz sometimes I get lonely in your love
(And you're good when you're good
And that makes it so tough
Cuz sometimes I get lonely in your love)
And I keep telling myself
You're gonna get right back up again
You're gonna get right back up
You're gonna get right back up
You're gonna get right back up again
(I keep telling myself)
You're gonna get right back up again
(I keep telling myself)
Sometimes in life
You've gotta move on
Sometimes it feels like the right one
Even when it's wrong
Every day I keep waiting for tomorrow
When the sun will shine and no more pills to swallow
And it's good when it's good
And that makes it so tough cuz
Sometimes I get lonely in your love
Sometimes I get lonely in your love
And that makes it so tough cuz
Sometimes I get lonely in your love
I pull away but you pull me back closer
I think I'm addicted to being your shoulder
And it's good when it's good
And that makes it so tough
Cuz sometimes I get lonely in your love