Hi Josh, I like that a lot! I like very simple song structures and not too many words, sometimes you can get more across by using less, for sure. It gives the listener space to put there own thoughts into it. I think haiku poetry works the same way, by having a very short, very strict template, somehow it opens up more creative thoughts. It is not an easy thing to pull off, but I think you've done a great job, there. Good luck and keep it up!