The Hollow Man

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PeteS

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« Reply #15 on: July 08, 2021, 02:12:45 PM »
Hi Alan, 

I love the way this builds throughout and as others have said, the different drum style makes it stand apart.   My only slight criticism is that in places I feel the vocal could be a little louder.

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« Reply #16 on: July 08, 2021, 05:30:30 PM »
Woah love your voice! really nice folky sound. I can picture playing this crusin down the motor way with the windows down!

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« Reply #17 on: July 09, 2021, 11:47:47 PM »
@montydog This is a really classy song. How the hell do offer crits here?! I just got carried along with the whole thing so I can only offer a big thumbs up. Great vocals and the arrangement is superb. A very professional production too. You probably guessed by now, I like this song!! :)

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« Reply #18 on: July 10, 2021, 01:45:50 PM »
Ah, this is the way I like my Alan! :-)
Fab vocals, great lyrics and a song well written and executed.

A few mix notes:

Before the electric guitar joins the acoustic on the side have nothing to balance it on the other side which was a little disturbing for me (at least on headphones)
I think you could back off the electric guitar just a little, to me it is a little too prominent atm
And please bring up that tasty Dobro(?) solo guitar!

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