To My Grave

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Cameron F

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« on: September 15, 2014, 01:34:03 AM »
Verse 1 –
To say that we’re not living,
It’s too much to take,
I’ve been left with, no chair to sit in,
Nothing left to say

Chorus –
But now I say this cos I,
I’m feeling oh so brave
But I’ll carry you my darling,
All the way, to my grave

Verse 2
I know I’ve been forgiven but,
I feel oh so ashamed,
I’ve lost what I was given,
I’ve only myself to blame

Pre Chorus –
I can’t believe I’m living,
To see this day,
If I could go back in time there’s nothing,
That I would change

Chorus
But now I say this cos I,
I’m feeling oh so brave
But I’ll carry you my darling,
All the way, to my grave


Feedback's always appreciated, cheers

jonpromos

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« Reply #1 on: October 13, 2014, 08:23:58 PM »
Yeah, my kind of seize-the-day lyric. Good ABAB. And great job carrying over the rhyme of the previous verse to the chorus.
When hope fails a servant or prey,
Anger frees him from all the chains,
If hope disappoints, anger prevails,
And freedom is worth all the pain.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s3CrpsrkEt0