[titiami]

I'm not sure about these unfinished lyrics, i was hoping  could send them to Nashville song, so your reviews will be greatly appreciated.

FEELS LIKE

I’m slapping the sleep off my face,
Slowly I’m slipping back to life,
My eyes are wide awake now,
I can see the light.
Its coming, coming,
Its stronger, stronger,
Sweeping me off my feet,

 CHORUS –and it feels like I can touch the sky,
                     It feels like I can never be shy,
                     It’s a  one time in a life time,
                    and I’m not gonna let true love pass me by.

I'm standing with my two feet,
I’m taking my two steps with no fear,
I’m saying the word and I believe in it,
I can feel it,
Its love, love
Its real , real,
Sweeping me off my feet.

CHORUS –and it feels like I can touch the sky,
                     It feels like I can never be shy,
                     It’s a  one time in a life time,
                    and I’m not gonna let true love pass me by.

[Stroller2010]

Think this is going well so far - might be a bit too cliche, seeing the light, being stronger etc. but its easy to fall into that. But the message is clear and put across well. I think a good extended chorus sort of thing would end it well.

[Schedule9]

I like it. The lyrics expel a lot of energy. I could make sugestions, but who am i to judge. I like it

[titiami]

THANK YOU A LOT FOR THE FEED BACK,SCHEDULE 9 FEEL FREE TO MAKE ANY SUGGESTIONS, WILL BE GREATLY APPRECIATED.