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Title: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: boku77 on July 07, 2020, 09:41:45 PM

Hi first of all, I'm new to the forums,

I could do with some feedback on a song I recently wrote. Not sure if it's a demo cause the song is finished melody and structure wise but I guess I post it here.
There are no lyrics yet because it's when I wrote it and that's why the volume is lower. I was not singing it fully, just staying in touch with it.
There is a quick songwriting note also, don't mind it.


Remember to turn back volume.

Title: Re: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: Andreas on July 07, 2020, 10:31:15 PM

I really like this! A very indie, laid back feel to it, which I can see myself listen to around a fireplace

Title: Re: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: PaulyX on July 08, 2020, 06:48:17 AM

Welcome.  This has definitely got potential and is worth finishing.  Nice melodies in the vocals and your voice sounds cool. 

Title: Re: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: boku77 on July 08, 2020, 01:54:54 PM

Alright :) Thank you for your input, I had no idea what is it with this song, now I feel like continueing with it.

Title: Re: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: simonjol on July 13, 2020, 06:51:55 PM

Hey

for sure you must finish it, great potential with that neat chord progression
It's an interesting title to inspire a lyric too.

Nice one!

 i'm also new on here it's a great site, welcome.

Si

Title: Re: Thinking of around you (ballade-like)
Post by: Arthur_Satine on August 21, 2020, 01:11:06 AM

I like the mood of this track, pretty sad and romantic. I really want to hear the final version!