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Let me go (rnb)

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« on: April 24, 2010, 12:15:56 PM »
HI, Im new here, I start writing songs since 1 year and half ago, although I'm doing music since 15 years. Im more into composing music than writing lyrics, I find it way more difficult!!! I also have the instrumental for this one, so I'll post it when I'll finish recording. ;)

LET ME GO

Verse 1

The first time I met you
I was so sad and blue
But you show me a way to get through this
I would have done anything for you, for you
Cos I felt so good, when I was with you
I would have miss you the second you were gone
Nothing could stop us we were strong
We were unbreakable

Chorus

I know we had a great life together
But now it’s finish, it’s all over
Now u have to let me go
Just let me go

Verse 2

Now it looks like you’re broken I don’t feel right
But there’s nothing I can do
Wish I could be here with you right now
I’ll be on your side
Every time, you’ll think of me
Look at the sky
But you have to move on
Yes you gotta to be strong

Chorus

I know we had a great life together
But now it’s finish, it’s all over
Now u have to let me go
Just let me go

Destiny had other plans for us
Another life for us
So u have to let me go, Please let me go

Bridge,

Oooooh oooooh let me go

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« Reply #1 on: April 29, 2010, 10:53:55 PM »
Welcome to the forum and thanks for posting up your lyrics.

Well it definitely reads like an r&b song, has a nice easy commercial feel and immediacy to it.  Can't wait to hear the recording. :)
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