Lyrics and melody wonderfully woven together and your vocal feels very pure. Powerful, poignant. And fab picking btw.
Perhaps either 'overcome' or 'ourselves' needs the change. The two together feel funny when coupled together with 'With' and then that very big strong word 'sacrifice' - for some reason unbeknownst to my small, weak brain...
I know nothing, but incase any of this helps, or offers further inspiration...
- we must overcome our 'trials/ways/steps etc' with sacrifice
- we must 'overpower/overthrow' ourselves with sacrifice - not sure that works, still.
- we must overcome ourselves 'through/and' sacrifice
- we must overcome ourselves with dignity/selflessness
Love the message. I'm in a similar area at the moment. Opening up and getting that light 'a shining - so important sometimes in our crazy, beautiful, messed up day and age!!
Hope alls well. Keep on picking
Caz