Cracking song Vintage. Seems churlish to pick any holes in such a good lyric, but I wonder of you could have varied the 'trying to find ways...' with two new lines on the second time around.
That would. of course, involve finding two new ways to describe someone we already decided is hard to describe. Nonetheless, it's the nearest thing to a flaw I can see in the whole of this gorgeous piece so I thought I'd flag it up.
Otherwise, as I said, cracking