Hi
@SlavaB - Nice job, really nice work, as Bill says the solo was messy, but I love that voice, really reminds me of Ramstein, don't worry about manually overloading your mic, some producers do it on purpose to get exactly that sound, so kudos to you!
I like the subject matter, who ever thought of singing about them? never gave it a second thought, the other thing that definitely works in this song is your accent, it gives it another really good dimension, adds colour in a really cool way. Love the rolled R's.
The middle section was a bit haphazard, but as a demo it was something that a prodcuer could work from.
at 2:21 That bass drum of whatever it is, maybe it's a bass synth, might benefit from halting during this quieter section, your vocal sounds different in this section, it's cleaner and should return to the distorted when the heavy guitars start again at 2:45.
I actually think there should be
more overdrive on the lead vocal, don't overdo it though, you could either bung a smidgen of fuzz box plugin on the track, or add a channel strip with a preamp, and you might have to EQ sensitively lest you loose it int he distorted mire....
It might benefit from a Deep Purple type of organ in the quiet section too, just an idea Slava...The solo guitar riff might work at the end section to add colour and variation.
Hope this helps, good luck with your music I've been watching your progress with interest, your production is definitely improving.
What changes did you make to your Studio? I'd be interested to know.
Hope this helps, it's great to hear a heavy song here.
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