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Collaborations / Re: Songwriting collaboration.
« Last post by Fwrunner on Yesterday at 05:52:32 AM »
Hi Pompeyjazz, I checked out your songs, very fresh and catchy. I also write songs in Pop/Rock/Adult Contemporary. Best, -Kevin
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by Elvis Nash on May 21, 2024, 10:29:16 PM »
Catch and release Mora , We could eat them but at 20lbs , soaked in butter milk . might be tuff
Well I'm a bit sensitive , But God made them a fish , Keeps me out of trouble really , fish all day , work on songs .
its much easier going to Safeway , I'm to lazy to clean a fish .
Its the evolution DNA in us , Hunters and gathers . Back to your song , its a great mix
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Collaborations / Re: Songwriting collaboration.
« Last post by pompeyjazz on May 21, 2024, 09:01:34 PM »
Hi @Fwrunner Welcome to the forum. There are many different artists on the forum doing all kinds of stuff. I listened to a couple of your tracks, There are a couple of very talented Country artists on here that may be willing for a collaboration. Nice to meet you and good luck 😀
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on May 21, 2024, 08:13:04 PM »
Let me listen first cup of coffee , No girl its centered , that's a very good mix I'm impressed. That's a cool song  . You're a genius . I'm not lol. broke the line .... This sounds professional, Not the fish , your song 

Menos mal chico!!! Gracias, I was thinking all my songs since using the actual headphone
s sounded with my voice not centered!!!
The fish... I remember that time ago I accompanied Marcus fishing, it was exciting to feel the pull of the fishing rod in your hand... but now I'm having problems when it comes to eating, lately I'm very sensitive to the lives of the animals that are killed for us to eat... I'm going to look like an egg or a yogurt or a salad or or or, look, a new song o o o
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by Elvis Nash on May 21, 2024, 08:00:41 PM »
Simple is better I reckon , Over produced songs are bit annoying . coffee is kicking in.. "Ships In The Harbor"... Tommy Prine , real simple but effective song.
Good job on this
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on May 21, 2024, 07:50:06 PM »
@moraamarolaloba
Such a hypnotising pulse! There’s a lot of suspension. Love it. I think your unique voice works very well here.

Some highlights for me:
• The start of the song with the low BPM pulse and the eerie FM (frequency modulation) sounds
• The mysterious lead synth/guitar at 1:15 (and the solo at the end of the song)
• The echo break and drop in brightness at 1:45

Cheers, Dorian

Hola @Dorian
Gracias!!! for your so detailed comment. thank you so much. Yes, it's Marcus guitar, I put on a FX, mix delay and vibrato, it sounds like melting... aquatic???
I am trying lately to use arrangement with less instruments... it's not easy for me, I am very rococo hahaha
I enjoy too using delay like another instrument, very interesting results.
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by Elvis Nash on May 21, 2024, 06:54:06 PM »
Let me listen first cup of coffee , No girl its centered , that's a very good mix I'm impressed. That's a cool song  . You're a genius . I'm not lol. broke the line .... This sounds professional, Not the fish , your song 





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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: Midnight Utopias
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on May 21, 2024, 05:58:06 PM »
Hey Mora
Pretty song and vid is super cool !!!


Hombre! Me alegra verte por aquí!!

I like this song, I don't know what it has at the end of some syllables that I love!! I'm my first fan, of course!!!
I wanted to ask you, yesterday I recovered some old headphones that had been damaged and that I had repaired, very good for mixing, but when listening to this song with them it gave me the feeling that my voice was a little to the left on the stereo...? In the current helmets I don't have that feeling but... I had doubts... Do you hear the voice in the center well? or not... @Elvis Nash
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: In the Rain
« Last post by moraamarolaloba on May 21, 2024, 05:45:32 PM »
Another fine song Mora.

Here some grammar mistakes distract
But all is forgiven

Starts to get even more interesting from 1.50
It does come across as a rain dance
with spooky undertones.

Hola @rightly
It's a special song for me... a lot of meaning.
Please, can you tell me the grammar mistakes? You would help me to write better in English.
Hasta luego y gracias!
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Feedback on Finished songs / Re: In the Rain
« Last post by rightly on May 21, 2024, 03:47:14 PM »
Another fine song Mora.

Here some grammar mistakes distract
But all is forgiven

Starts to get even more interesting from 1.50
It does come across as a rain dance
with spooky undertones.
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