'Reet, this is like my second tune, most of the time I find the music is more important than the words and work on a chord sequence and melody and then fit some words in. But I thought I'd try writing some words on their own and to be honest it's a bit of a shambles, there's no order, like chorus, verses and that. It's just alot of rhyming couplets. Though it does still have a meaning in it, to me, it's about wanting to be a better,happier person and finding yourself. But still, I'd like some feedback on whether or not any of it is any good and whether or not I should just scrap it. Cheers.
Your life lay in pieces,
It was your turn,
The reaper had come,
To watch you yearn.
All the good times,
They lay in the past,
These 10 years or so,
Have gone so fast.
The courthouse of life,
Your friends are all there,
You stand in the doorway,
What gifts will they bare?
Your family and comrades,
They stand all aware,
They don't show concern,
They don't even care
The shock of the light,
You’re sat in your car,
Is it worth the fight?.
Do you know who you are?
Are you doing good,
Through life’s twists and bends?
Is it too late?
For friendships to mend
If this day was your last,
Would you let it all slip away?,
Would you drag up the past,
Or live for the day?
