Thanks
I hear most say "drums out", so I'll guess that will happen when I sit down with the song again! I see that it was an "on" too much in that line.
Yeah, that chorus was probably the easiest to write but hardest to sing, and it was those lines that connected the whole song for me. Originally I started writing most of the verse in the rap genre, but then that part changed everything, and I ended up playing it as a slow down piano ballad.