hello again!
As i said in the title writing this song seems to be a never ending WIP.. I reckon i recorded the first version about 2 years ago.. Its evolved a lot since then,(i've probably recorded it 5 or 6 times to get to its current form) but im still not happy with it. I'm not sure what the problem is with it, so i decided to post it here and see what other people think about it.
I mean why spend two more years working on it only to find out the problem was the song itself?
Its quite a long song at about 5:20 (which may be part of the problem) and I'm sure not everyone will make it to the end lol, but it builds up a lot towards the end, which is the best bit.. so try and make it!
http://soundcloud.com/dankepig/lucky-charms-new-versionRecorded using 2 acoustics, a bass, and the ol' voice box. Again my equipment is useless so i apologise for the sound quality but hopefully it'll be enough to give you the impression of the song i hear in my head
Please let me know what you think, as im very unsure about this one..
**lyrics (I know these need work too lol)
Again i caught on too late
Because i never learn from my mistakes
And he didn't even wait
He just came in and wrecked the place
So now he lives in his dream
Where he's the only actor in the scene
Throw out your lucky charms
Because they wont protect you from his harms
It's too early now to call it late
I'm still not ready when the morning breaks
For a normal life in an ordinary place
With young child's eyes on an old man's face
The paranoid, hypothetical boy
That had everything he needed but he grows
into a face that no one knows
A disappearing act, as he's fading to black
Drawing the final curtain on his show
just a face that no one knows
Remember the time when you said you needed me?
Was it everything you wanted it to be?
Remember the time when you said you loved me?
Wasn't everything you needed it to be..