I dunno what to say about this really, so this reminds me of how hard life is, you know, you're not really given any direction, you just gotta do your own thing, I think it perfectly captures that, also you've got good structure here, and its an easy read and also not a hard thing to imagine as a song (By easy read I mean it doesn't confuse the hell out of you)
all in all, a decent write by you, as always.