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Title: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: habiTat on October 09, 2012, 02:08:59 PM
Couldn't resist writing a song about pies!


Ch
Your pie your pie
Its making me high
Your pie your pie
I think I can fly

Verse 1

You crushed up some
Leaves from the garden
You say you don't
Know what they are

A secret ingredient
That's what you say
And some dust that
You keep in a jar

Bridge

Baked in the oven
At gas mark seven
The smell on its own
Sends me to heaven

Ch


Verse 2

You served me
Exactly a third
Any more
Would be quite absurd

I've eaten the lot
My name I forgot
I'm floating around
Like a bird

Bridge
Chorus
End



Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: flossie on October 09, 2012, 02:18:21 PM
Must be a subliminal message, but I've just been shopping and bought a pie!!!

You are very, very naughty habitat!!!
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Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: S.T.C on October 09, 2012, 02:33:14 PM
When i lived abroad for 5 yrs hardly ate pie..now i`m making up for it though!..love pastry...esp porkpies.
Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: habiTat on October 09, 2012, 03:21:15 PM
Haha

As it happens, I've spoken to my other half and she's just bought pies for our tea.. :-\

Just steak though... no weeds :D

Funny how the universe works  :D
Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: habiTat on October 09, 2012, 03:41:06 PM
btw, this is what inspired it

http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-beds-bucks-herts-19868327

 :P
Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: travis on October 09, 2012, 05:54:33 PM
You're not from Wigan are you  lo Home of the pie.Good fun song, enjoy your pie
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Travis
Title: Re: Pie song - Your Pie
Post by: Binladeda on October 09, 2012, 10:56:19 PM
 Very good  ;D ;D...One problem that I've spotted straight away.....It would be to much of a temptation for me to resist, when singing, to change the word bird for turd  ;D ;D ;D....but maybe that would work ;D...I can already hear what the backing vocals would be singing in the chorus ;D