Euphoria

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Mutrins

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« on: February 26, 2017, 03:58:05 AM »
Hey all,

I’ve got a new song i’ve been working on called Euphoria. Would love some feedback on this one.

Warning: some language may be offensive.

https://soundcloud.com/micky-shiloah/euphoria-demo-4

Thanks so much!!
Micky

Lyrics:
I’m addicted to euphoria
I’m addicted to the way that it makes me feel
Like a motherf*cking warrior
Like i’m radiating light through the atmosphere

Oh god, I’m loving it loving it (repeat)

I’ve gotta have it every day now
I’m looking for a quick dose that’ll satisfy me
It’s how I live my days now
It feels so good to make believe

So come with me and i’ll
Show you what the stars are really made of
You’ve got no idea
I’ve seen the light
And that’s why

I’m addicted to euphoria
I’m addicted to the way that it makes me feel
Like a motherf*cking warrior
Like i’m radiating light through the atmosphere

Oh god, I’m loving it loving it (repeat)

Cuz there isn’t any better way to make you believe
That i’m living in a kingdom of ecstasy
Than take a taste of a remedy
I came across when I felt I was ending

I swear I hurt before
The pain was so much more
than a kid from Queens could take
could take fake f*cking people
coming in and out of hallways

Now I’ll
show you what the stars are really made of
You’ve got no idea
I’ve seen the light
And now I…

I’m addicted to euphoria
I’m addicted to the way that it makes me feel
Like a motherf*cking warrior
Like i’m radiating light through the atmosphere

Oh god, I’m loving it loving it (repeat)

JasonL

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« Reply #1 on: March 03, 2017, 04:47:33 AM »
Great track.  Clearly you know what you're doing.
My only concern would be that your main hook ("I'm addicted to euphoria") sounds very similar to "Let's get it on and Marvin Gaye".
But they do say, better a hit with a writ than no hit at all.

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« Reply #2 on: March 04, 2017, 12:40:46 AM »
Oh god, I’m loving it! (sorry for stealing your line, Micky, but it had to be done).

It's such a catchy little number, full of musical twists and infectious beats.

If I catch myself singing this to myself (or even out loud) later on at the gym, I won't be surprised. Like a motherf*cking warrior!

Gonna share this with a few people who will appreciate it.

cheers,
L

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« Reply #3 on: March 04, 2017, 09:08:20 AM »
Yeah it's a great tune. very catchy. The lyrics are going to be divisive. I'm not sure where I stand on them myself. The middle aged me doesn't like them, but the young me loves them!

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« Reply #4 on: March 05, 2017, 01:25:43 AM »
Great track.  Clearly you know what you're doing.
My only concern would be that your main hook ("I'm addicted to euphoria") sounds very similar to "Let's get it on and Marvin Gaye".
But they do say, better a hit with a writ than no hit at all.

Thank you!

Oh man...I guess they are a little similar. Never even thought about that. Ah well, lots of songs have similar melodies. I'm sticking to it! lol. bring on the writ!!

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« Reply #5 on: March 05, 2017, 01:27:06 AM »
Oh god, I’m loving it! (sorry for stealing your line, Micky, but it had to be done).

It's such a catchy little number, full of musical twists and infectious beats.

If I catch myself singing this to myself (or even out loud) later on at the gym, I won't be surprised. Like a motherf*cking warrior!

Gonna share this with a few people who will appreciate it.

cheers,
L

Hey thank you so much!

Really glad you enjoyed the song. I hope that you sang it out loud at the gym, that would be amazing lol. And thank you so much for sharing it with some people!

Also, steal the line any time you want to! ha

Thanks again, I appreciate it!!

Micky


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« Reply #6 on: March 05, 2017, 01:27:59 AM »
Yeah it's a great tune. very catchy. The lyrics are going to be divisive. I'm not sure where I stand on them myself. The middle aged me doesn't like them, but the young me loves them!

Thank you!

Yea so far it's been divisive, but I think I'm going to stick to my guns.

Thanks again!!