[RC James]

https://soundcloud.com/rc-james-user841120068/desolation-revelations?si=38e741f138fd433bb23b3fbb1312232f&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing


With your street-car visions
up against the wall,
you're looking for a reason
to sing again.
You make it clear you don’t want
to be rescued,
you've got a plan to move
no one knows when.

(chorus)
Where is the solution?
can you tell me
about the new revolution?
Is there someplace I can join up
or is it just a new delusion?

None of your battles
were in vain;
looking out a tower window
now you sit,
mind drifting
through the past,
where you lost your power

(chorus)

We exhausted
the night
with emotional
investigations.
I felt comfort
in your voice
as it reached out
for my creations.

(chorus)

Someone's approaching
in the distance;
you act as though
you know them.
I feel you slipping away
from me
like the faithful entering
Jerusalem.

(chorus)

[ChrisPrice]

I can't offer any crits as this is just you doing what you do so well. It's loose as hell, but it works well with your lyrics. Keep em comin'

[rightly]

Hi RC.
You're a master magician at this.

This is a bit looser than your previous offerings.
It's always a joy to hear your songs.
You've excellent style.
Do keep them coming.

[moraamarolaloba]

Hola @RC James

Before listening to the song I like to read the story and this one has fantastic lines, it is intimate, very personal and full of questions whose answers do not matter. Very you, and that makes you different.