Love hearing your voices together, really unique and engaging sound.
I remember these lyrics and I think the atmosphere and pace really Sever them well.
I lived all the subtle stuff in the background- the bass sounds great in particular. I too would like a breakdown somewhere maybe with just claps and vocals to bring out a key section - possibly the “cruel world” part.
Tremendous originality and a fantastic collaboration going on here.
Thanks Adam
I must have been going for a poppy sound here.
I've a long way to go, learning by doing.
I'll not revisit this but apply good advice and new insights into future songs.
Some things are truly difficult to master and so very many aspects are to be considered.
I feel like I'm still improving and as long as I have that feeling I'm likely to be 'appy with things.
thanks for commenting, your tips are appreciated.