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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: irwin on July 17, 2022, 06:53:37 PM
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Do you guy appreciate this style of music, Any feedback welcome!
Short Pants (REMIX)
©2022 Irwin Abrigo
(Chorus)
The girls dem ah tek off dem lang pants
And dem ah put on dem Shart pants
The girls don't want to wear lang pants
All dem want is shart pants
Is only Shart pants shart pants shart pants
Everywhere they go they wear shart pants
Is just Shart pants shart pants shart pants
All dem wearing is shart pants
The girls dem ah tek off them jeans
And dem ah cut it way above them knees
Dem go on like greed
Like it's the only thing around dem need
It ah spread around the world like seed
Man ah watch and dem eyes it ah bleed
Ah Gal put it on and enemy shay breed
But mi know still shay affi succeed
(Chorus)
The girls dem ah tek off dem lang pants
And dem ah put on dem Shart pants
The girls don't want to wear lang pants
All dem want is shart pants
Is only Shart pants shart pants shart pants
Everywhere they go they wear shart pants
Is just Shart pants shart pants shart pants
All dem wearing is shart pants
The girls dem ah tek off them skirt
Yuh better be on the alerted
In them shart pants the girls them ah flirt
Nuff man heart dem ah hurt
Even though these girls down to earth
Expensive shoes dem ah mesh pun de dirt
And dem ah look for them worth
Dem want better dem nah settle for no worse
(Chorus)
The girls dem ah tek off dem lang pants
And dem ah put on dem Shart pants
The girls don't want to wear lang pants
All dem want is shart pants
Is only Shart pants shart pants shart pants
Everywhere they go they wear shart pants
Is just Shart pants shart pants shart pants
All dem wearing is shart pants
The girls dem ah tek off dem dress
Because dem want fe impress
Ah Foh the man dem who ah big up dem chest
Ask For a date and dem girl said yes
One hundred grand in him pocket not less
When dem step out dem ah look to their best
Yuh have fee come big Fuh invest
If yoh want Fuh catch the girls' interest
(Chorus)
The girls dem ah tek off dem lang pants
And dem ah put on dem Shart pants
The girls don't want to wear lang pants
All dem want is shart pants
Is only Shart pants shart pants shart pants
Everywhere they go they wear shart pants
Is just Shart pants shart pants shart pants
All dem wearing is shart pants
(Bridge)
The uptown girls and the down town girls
The country girls and the interior girls
The Black girls and the white girls
The Indian girls and Amerindians girls
The Chinese girls and the douglers
Fat girls slim girls
Tall girls shart girls
Girls all around the world (dem wearing)
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Cool vibe Irwin 8)
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Cool vibe Irwin 8)
Appreciate the comment. I post the lyric for members to read. Thanks for the reply.
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Hola @irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)
I really like the instrumental base, the rhythm and style as well as the way you deliver the lyrics but it gives me the feeling that you are not in the key? or is it me?
Be that as it may, I like your idea and what it describes, hahaha, it's true, I imagine a lot of congestion in many men hahaha
I had a great time listening to you...
Stay well
Mora
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Very creative and high energy remix
Maya
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Hey Irwin, this made me smile a guilty smile ... probably a non-PC smile ... but I smiled. It's pretty odd, but I liked that! The strange minor key of the verses and then the way it transitions into totally different keys, major key in (what might be) the chorus... although the bass seems to stay the same all the way through, a lot changes around it. You are not following any conventional rules here and big respect for that. Cheeky and irreverent and creative and fun.
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A million miles from I usually listen to, but that's not a criticism. I really like it. The production is spot on. I definitely wear long pants these days!! Seriously, this is a great track..very commercial. Keep em comin' :)
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yeah quite like this tune its pretty original and has a good sense of fun to it .overall i liked it a lot
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Hola @irwin (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=19439)
I really like the instrumental base, the rhythm and style as well as the way you deliver the lyrics but it gives me the feeling that you are not in the key? or is it me?
Be that as it may, I like your idea and what it describes, hahaha, it's true, I imagine a lot of congestion in many men hahaha
I had a great time listening to you...
Stay well
Mora
Thank you so much for listening Mora, I am happy to know you had a great time doing so. I'd looked around and saw what the lyric describes then I sat down and wrote this song. I thought it would have gone viral.
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Very creative and high energy remix
Maya
Love your comment Maya, many thanks.