@adamwolf - Man you have something special.. I just dig your tentative playing, the vocal delivery and the vibe.
This one is better quality to the other song I shared here (recording wise) because
my mic apparently had a limiter (didn't know when I bought it) and strumming and loud singing get distorted and since this one is quieter it worked fine on the mic, if anyone knows what I can do about that btw please tell me, I tried lowering the signal and amplifying it by using DAW but it didn't sound good, it sounded really low quality, and I have no idea what to do lol
Please use headphones when you listen.
-I was experimenting with an odd structure lyrically, did that work? -
Definitely worked-I know it's bleak but is it good enough someone might wanna listen to it that it's worth balancing out the darkness with positive hopeful stuff?
OK-I don't know anything about singing but I feel like my voice wasn't bad here, just tell me feedback on how it was? Is it 'pleasant' to listen to? Am I singing in tune? Did the 'powerful' parts sound good and add dynamic?
Mosty was in tune, some notes a little off focus, dynamics were good-I wanna have more music in the back ground so it's suppose to be a little more than this, but as the core of a song, is it good or too boring? I can't write lead guitar but that's one of the things I had in mind
Yes, it did get a little predictable, but I'm sure that can be resolved tastefully - a good song is recognisable even through poor production/cheap instruments etc.-I just wanna know what you thought it general
Pretty impressed with what you do, I'm not sure whether more instruments would be the right thing