hi dont post much on this forum but wanted to post this new track i did SHADOWS with a talented singer NellDare. its basically a dream pop song about wasting your time and enjoying it ! anyways would be interested in hearing any feedback or thoughts you have about the songwriting or production thanks
SO LONG
SITTING HERE
DAY AFTER DAY
AND YEAR AFTER YEAR
THE LIGHT FLOWS DOWN
THE WINDOWPANE
IM HERE IN SIDE
WATCHING SHADOWS
IM JUST WATCHIN SHADOWS FALL
WATCHING SHADOWS ON THE WALL
THERES NO TIME AT ALL
AS SHADOWS FALL
IM JUST WATCHIN SHADOWS FALL
WATCHING SHADOWS ON THE WALL
THERES NO LIGHT AT ALL
WATCHING SHADOWS
ONCE AGAIN,
YOU TOOK
MY TIME
ALL UP
MY FRIEND
BUT NOW I SEE
WHEN I SPEAK
THEY ALL WILL HEAR
WITH OPENED EYES
FROM THE DEAD WE RISE
CHORUS
INSTRUMENTAL
REPEAT CHORUS