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Title: I Want To Break Free
Post by: SilverBeat on September 23, 2017, 01:15:31 AM

My August 2017 song is "I Want To Break Free" Please let me know what you think.

https://www.reverbnation.com/silverbeat/song/28501802-i-want-to-break-free
 
Cheers,
Terry

Title: Re: I Want To Break Free
Post by: Oldbutyet on September 23, 2017, 11:31:00 PM

Post lyrics mate, sounds good so far but like to read and sing along, talk more  8)

Title: Re: I Want To Break Free
Post by: pompeyjazz on September 23, 2017, 11:33:21 PM

Is that the one with the vacuum cleaner?

Title: Re: I Want To Break Free
Post by: Neil C on October 01, 2017, 11:08:21 AM

Nice tune and lyrics.
like the string section
I wasn't entirely sure by the vocal processing initially
catchy
 :) neil