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Songwriter Forum => Feedback on Finished songs => Topic started by: Jack_Diamond. on February 26, 2019, 10:38:04 AM
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I liked what I heard, the I heard, the more became Interested.
It does sounds like a very nice intro. If it was mine I'd try to finish it.
It has a special mood. Possibly the longer you leave the more difficult it'll be to get back in there.
Keep em comin'.
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Very atmospheric Jack. Sounded like an introduction to a Scandanavian crime drama. I liked what you were doing on the bass in particular. Like @Rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) says, I would try and persevere with this one as it's got great potential. The mood that you have created is special. Don't lose it
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The first part is very atmospheric and hypnotic, if a bit quiet compared to other tracks in my feed. The guitar work is really sweet. I like that you have gone for this chilled instrumental vibe, it has lots of charm. Wonderful!
The ending was a little abrupt, of course.
Overall. a totally chilled out journey, good one!
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Well I think you did what you set out to do.
chilled indeed
:-)
neil
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@Rightly (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20219) Thank you. after having some time off from it i've come up with some vocal part ideas so i guess its far from finished again.
@pompeyjazz (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=20269) Cheers mate. Ive been watching the bridge recently which could explain things. Ive got some ideas in the works regarding this track now.
@MichaelA (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=21274) Thanks. Im probably gonna re-mix then limit, you are right about low level loudnes.
@Neil C (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?action=profile;u=18856) Cheers :)
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Nice Jack. Pretty much anything with things playing backwards in it works for me! But this was very cool, in particular when it turns that corner at around the 1:20 mark. Chilled but slightly frosty and sinister too. You chopped the end of though I think? Unless that was deliberate. Anyway, like it! Nice pic on Soundcloud too.
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Enjoyed that. If there's a change it's screaming out for, it's getting that bass right up to the front. I don't think making it punchy would destroy the feel, but rather help the whole thing along.