My latest production
Another one where I was quite doubtful it'd work out
I think it did in the end
Feedback would be thrilling
link:
https://soundcloud.com/2rightly/i-look-see-horizon
Lyrics:
i look see horizon
in the year of death
did I not live alone?
there I found your sweetness
now I just want you to know
I look see horizon
as near as it can be
I just close my eyes and
it’s like you’re here with me
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I look see horizon
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when this war is over
before the next begins
if I get to hold you
it matters less who wins
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I look see horizon
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well, that would be my luck
to give a fuck then t' fall
for one who leaves me wanting
when I would have it all
‘goes around, comes around
y’know that’s what they say
furthermore if not now
I'll get mine someday
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I look see horizon
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when this war is over
before the next begins
if i get to hold you
it matters not who wins
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I look see horizon
I look see horizon
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will I get to know you?
when this war is over
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Rightly
@rightly your music is so fresh and original. It's so uniquely you and I can't commend you highly enough for finding your voice with such flair.
The music reminds me slightly of the circus. Do hope this observation is not too flippant! It sounds to me sparkling, colourful, wonderous. I feel the mood turn more serious and profound, however, as we go to the chorus. It's such a great piece of poetry in my opinion:
when this war is over
before the next begins
if i get to hold you
it matters not who wins
Beautiful. I do hope you got to hold the person in question.