@CharlieSmith First welcome indeed, hope you stick around , maybe come along to the Friday evening chat.
I'm writing as I listen...the audio quality is actually endearing and brings something to it (some pay money to get that sound)
Yip, the vocals could be a bit louder, but as a song it's really good.
would be a great song to add the Nirvana treatment to...I'd do the quiet then full on Curbain thing, maybe even sample the original track in the beginning...You'd need to sing full Balls Out though, which aint so easy.
"Stamen" might be a title?
Good song man, and again Welcome.