I really liked and enjoyed this
@Whiteorange - but I may be the exception in that I wish everyone just posted a raw song, not necessarily a first or second take, or even a version recorded just hours after writing a piece (some of mine take months before they're complete), but just the song. For me, the arrangement and production is something totally separate and I always try to imagine people's songs without all that extra work. And to treat it as a performance is also music to my ears - all my songs are written with performance in mind. So I'm very pleased with your approach.
Yes, very Dylanesque and it suits your voice and the guitar playing is fine for this style. I listen to a lot of very old, mostly long dead, players and the odd half bar, hiccup, dropped or added beat, is all part of the charm, assuming one is into that sort of thing. Many don't find it charming at all :-)
The only thing I wish to comment on is the line "...eyes of hate". The rest seemed to paint a particular picture, but that line stood out as feeling (to me) somewhat out of place.
I look forward to hearing more and reading your introduction.
Derek