Have you ever stared at the stars
And realised how small we are
I really like that part, it opens the song with an interesting subject/question and then adds another path with an interesting point of view.
In my opinion, you can pretty much set up a whole song using these two lines as they are very powerful and they let the reader think.
That things aren't as hard as they seem
And the future's not that far
In these two lines I feel kind of lost.
Which things aren't as hard as they seem? how did you get into this conclusion?
It really begins to feel like any other song, I think you should add more details regarding your thoughts and your feelings using an image - let the readers live the song with you.
I'm sorry for the terrible explanation, I'm new to this, hope I made myself clear enough.