Ah. This is kinky as in 'use a feather,' not the whole chicken. Gotcha
(it's a quote, people)I'm usually the one to call lyrics generic, but that's only when they can't quite do the job the lyricist sets out for them and these do. Besides, most lines weren't generic - just one or two phrases we've all heard before, not enough to create a problem. I'd have liked, in a song about sex, to hear more of the sights, sounds, smells, and emotions, to create a connection with the listener and to stir that damp, slightly sticky part of their brain into remembering it, but that's more with a mind to radio play and record sales and I'm not sure if you want that for your music. And 'Nothing' by
A (
literally the most difficult song to Google) is similar to this and does fine in the same, plain-speaking manner.
There was nothing else about it I'd change, it'd certainly be a great addition to my post-gig soundtrack if you got it published (
). As for the genre it could almost be anything. I'd like to
say grunge or punk or rock or metal or any of these, but that's only because a lot of fans well into their sub-genres like kinky stuff. Now that's more mainstream, thanks to Fifty Shades of Grey and the like, the appeal of this song need not be confined to them. I'd personally like to hear it as rock in the same vein as The Pretty Reckless' first album (
songs like this) but that's just me.