Hi all,
I know I'm new to this forum, and this seems to be a very much 'get what you give' community - which is great - though obviously new members like myself stumble across these sites with a goal in mind; to get some feedback on their work (and I'm simply too excited).
I find it difficult find time to turn on my laptop outside of work and participate but am at the start of a week-long holiday with my father to relax and escape work stresses, so expect my increased activity here (for the week at least) doing what I enjoy; listening to, writing and creating music.
Now I only purchased my guitar last December and it has been a huge change in genre for myself and after attempting to write and perform multiple songs I believe I've finally found something which is 'getting there' and can be improved on to create an actual performable song, so all and any feedback will mean a lot and be greatly appreciated.
The song came about from being put into positions where people with authority over me seem to have a completely different outlook on the world - and force this upon myself. It's about not being on the same level as other people and that becoming a real problem when trying to live your life.
https://soundcloud.com/namelessmc/cant-be-realRe-Recorded From Feedback:
https://soundcloud.com/namelessmc/cant-be-real-1Verse 1Everybody's tripping think I'm losing my mind
If this is just a dream please give me a sign
Reality is slipping and it's harder to find
Nothing's what it seems, and my eyes are open wide
CourusThis can't be real
It's what I feel
Lets make a deal
Before I'm out of time
This can't be real
I'm forced to kneel
My Fate is sealed
I'm out of time
Verse 2I need to rethink, my whole damn world
My outlook on life, the thoughts that I build
Takes just a blink - your life stops still
Stuck at the brink - lose your free will
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Chord sequence is pretty much unceremoniously adapted from 'Sitting at the Dock of the Bay'; G, B7 C, A7 and chorus G, B7, G, B7, G, A7, G, B7 with a little breakdown basically going G-D-C-F(of some sort)-Dm-D
Recorded using a Blue Snowball microphone straight into Audacity (guitar and vocals in one) and a Rio classical guitar.
Many Thanks,
Scott.