Daydreamin‘

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Neumi

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« on: May 04, 2024, 12:17:45 AM »
Hey guys, this is the first and only song I have recorded so far with the help of an amazing producer from sonic boom studios. I wish I had more time recording this. Especially for the vocals but it turned out ok I think. Its a song about getting lost in daydreams, trying to escape reality but not with the outcome one wished for.

https://on.soundcloud.com/kQFDLNrTkc5mNt1WA


Lyrics:


[Verse 1]
Yeah, it keeps me up
A feeling I can barely define
My thoughts in a rush
I‘m slowly losing track of time


[Pre-Chorus]
I find myself getting lost inside my head
Keep falling for those alluring mistakes
That I can‘t escape, locked every way to go
It‘s face to face against the well-unknown


[Chorus]
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
My thoughts are deceiving
They put me through thin air
The edges of despair
I‘m late up daydreamin‘


[Post Chorus]
Yeah I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know
My Thoughts are deceiving
Out of control
Like nightmare on Elm St.
There‘s no way to go
Yeah, I‘ve been daydreamin‘
More than you know


[Verse 2]
When I‘m losing grip
The moment that I realize
I start to overthink
My mood on static decline


[Pre-Chorus]
[Chorus]
[Post-Chorus]


[Bridge]
Hard times making it through my life
Dark times transcending through my mind
Someday I wake up and I‘ll be fine
One day I snap back to real life


[Chorus] Spoken
[Post-Chorus]
[Bridge/Outro]

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« Reply #1 on: May 04, 2024, 11:08:27 AM »
Nice to meet you, welcome to the bus!!! I enjoyed listening to your song, wonderful production, a very actual an balanced mix, vocals, arrangement, really catchy too!!!
Hasta luego!!! Nice lyrics! @Neumi
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Neumi

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« Reply #2 on: May 06, 2024, 08:38:07 AM »
Nice to meet you, welcome to the bus!!! I enjoyed listening to your song, wonderful production, a very actual an balanced mix, vocals, arrangement, really catchy too!!!
Hasta luego!!! Nice lyrics! @Neumi

Thank you so much for your kind words!

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« Reply #3 on: May 08, 2024, 12:19:40 AM »
If this is your first recording then the future looks very bright for you. To be honest, it's not a genre I listen to by choice, but this is really well crafted. Your producer has done an excellent job here. Great stuff :)