this a track Binladeda and i have been working on lately..in need of feedback, on the mix
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O6nPkOVX5Vg&feature=youtu.beyes, too much going on, as always, but i have trouble choosing what to leave out
no seriously, what needs to be cut out or go drastically down, and in what sections...
or all over?
advise and opinions are very! much appreciated.
Lyrics are something like this, but we are not sure yet
:
lets all fall in love
lets do something beautiful
just like a thief out in the night
lets make a piece of history
yeah we'll take off all our clothes
run into the sand
looking like two comets
falling from the deep blue sky
lets all make a camp
please each other endlessly
i'm falling deep in love
moving with the energy
we can never make it sing
feeling it tonight
falling deep into your eyes
under the deep blue sky
so lets all fall in love
yeah lets do something beautiful
we can run into the night
make it, only fall in love
under this deep blue sky
oh yeah, well it's old and new
baby you can love it
i've been told
playing round with nothing in your hair
falling over you
so lets all fall in love
lets do something beautiful
yeah, we'll run out in the night
like two comets in the sky