This song was written on a bus and was inspired merely by the lights on the bus going out and sparking back to life a few moments later. I elaborated on this simple line to achieve the whole song, which is about going through the motions of a daily routine just to please other people, and wanting to not have to do that anymore.
After looking over the lyrics about two months afterwards, I decided that I wanted the music to be slightly eerie and dark, and I hope I have achieved just that.
The only thing I'm not looking for particular comment on is the vocals, because I'm currently looking for somebody else to take the reigns in that department. Pretty much everything else I am open to comments on, more specifically the music and perhaps the lyrics because I would like to know your opinions on whether the song has a decent meaning/story. Also, if you could tell me whether you think the music and lyrics work well together or not, that'd be great! Thanks in advance!
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VERSE1
The lights flickered on and off,
I decided I've had enough.
Everybody stared at me
As I stumbled past his presence.
The cold shook my ribbon bones
To the point where I was left alone.
Nothing could then prepare me
For his beauty so pleasant.
PRE-CHORUS1
Fall away, fall apart,
Take away my broken heart.
Fly away into the dark,
Take away the bite and bark.
CHORUS
Everything has shattered to stardust,
On the edge of broken pieces from this mistrust,
And my life so empty resolves so soon
Just to even out the chasing silver spoon.
VERSE2
The trees tumble back and forth,
So I decided to ride out the course.
Getting rid of the hate in me
Could lead me to collapse and perish.
The pavement moved under my feet
Into a dark place so discreet.
It drained the light in me
For I had a crave to cherish.
PRE-CHORUS2
Fall away, fall apart,
Take away my broken heart.
Drive away, back to the start,
Take away the vile marks.
CHORUS
Everything has shattered to stardust,
On the edge of broken pieces from this mistrust,
And my life so empty resolves so soon
Just to even out the chasing silver spoon.
MIDDLE EIGHT
If I could break away,
I'd uncouple myself so fast.
If I could fly away,
I'd do it to forget the past.
CHORUS
Everything has shattered to stardust,
On the edge of broken pieces from this mistrust,
And my life so empty resolves so soon
Just to even out the chasing silver spoon
Of the moon.
© Thomas Yeomans 2013