Hello here's another new one, I wrote it yesterday and have just recorded an acoustic demo. I'd love some feedback on the song please, maybe some help with the phrasing in the chorus?v Oh and there's a little surprise for anyone who listens to the end
Lyrics
Floating round on the breeze
That is my mind
Climbing trees just to see
Exactly is my crime
I've never been this hungry
All I want it what's mine
Cos i'm free to believe
I ain't run out of time
Chorus
I'll wait
Oh I'll wait
I'll just wait
For myself
2nd verse
Look into your northern eyes
What will I see
That ain't blue they ain't green
That's alright with me
Take my hand take my heart
Take what you need
Leave behind just enough
For me to breathe