Hi,
Quite like the musical parts at the start, with panning between left and right working well. I'm finding your vocal a bit too over processed for my liking, although I do quite like the layering, which is quite well done (the levels you've used to mix the layering - that is).
I didnt expect such a massive variation in the song, where it goes to the part with the acoustic. Quite liked that, took a different direction, and certainly kept me engaged as new listener. Although it then kept the same rhythm/feel for quite a while and on into the solo (another 80 seconds or so). I would say another part would have been useful to provide variation.
I think the mixing/balance is well done, and its quite a nice chilled out song.
Cheers
John