@IronKnee I really really like this, great melody and some really great lyrics too - ‘ You can’t hide it Your body language shows’ - that’s good!👍 I really like how you treat your excellent vocals too, is it only double tracked or something else too? Anyway it gives a really nice eerie haunting quality to it... it makes me think of Tunng who are ace! Very nice sir!👌
Hi MMM.......Thanks for listening and commenting. The vocals are two tracks recorded separately. I'm basically singing along with myself. No difference in the treatment of those two tracks.
I'm glad you liked it! Thanks, again,
-T
@IronKnee
Hi, lovely song, enjoyed it. Great production, the guitars and vocals sounded really good to me!
Nice one!
Jamie
Thanks Jamie.........I really appreciate it!
This is a wonderfully pleasant listen. The way that you are picking the guitar just moves the song perfectly.
I agree about the whistling and about the vocal treatment.
thanks Unclenny..........most appreciated. Thanks for looking in!
@IronKnee
Shades of Crosby Stills and Nash here. Weirdly your voice on this reminds me of Graham Nash and he was the English one! The guitar playing is absolutely beautiful(love the hammer-ons) and the simplicity of the arrangement with your lovely vocals is a magical combination. Not so keen on the harsh sounding solo at the end - I think it breaks the spell and is really at odds with the rest of the song. I would change that - it kind of spoils what is otherwise a lovely thing. The lyrics are direct and simple but effective. I particularly like this bit:
"And the way you float on clouds
As thin as your denial" - that's first class writing in my book.
You are one of my favourite people on this forum and solo apart, I thought this was magic.
M
Thanks M.......it means a lot coming from you.
The electric was a bit of a last minute "thing". It sounded good in my head, but am a bit uncertain about it, still.
Thanks for the support.
I thought I already commented on this. It is beautiful. And because I apparently didn't follow through on my comment, Alan @montydog beat me to remarking on that great line "...clouds as thin as your denial". The title is great! Creative, original.
Thanks CaliaMoko..........I appreciate it. I'm fond of that line, as well ;-)