[jim morrison]

http://soundcloud.com/sunset-music-productions/freight-train-riot-acoustic

I rushed the acoustic version of this a bit, but see what you think

[Soul Punk]

Not gonna lie

I loved this, the way it is right now!

I suggest to keep it as raw as it turned out gives it a very down to earth quality

enjoyed it alot

[digger72]

Hi Jim,

Like the bluesy feel of the guitars. I like the vocal arrangement, but not so sure about the echo effect on the vocal. I tend towards the gruff, blues vocals. Lyrics are good ol' blues based. Some harmonica would be nice in there.

Overall good tune.

Digger

[chrislong170273]

Hey Jim,

i'm lovin your stuff. The verse in particular in this, with that 'moneyesque' guitar riff.
I don't like giving specific suggestions cos it's so subjective.
But for me, the strummed guitar pattern halts the flow a bit

little reverb on the voice would also be something to try, a la Mr E from Eels?

(sorry, just reread that, change to 'a little less reverb')

but i really did enjoy this
 

Chris

[Kafla]

Jim - I really like this - your best song for me

Could be a little tighter during the acoustic part but thats a minor grumble

I really like this

[flossie]

Hi Jim,

Really enjoyed this one, and your singing is is excellent.  I have to agree about the chorus, it flows so sweetly and then the chorus interrupts the flow, don't know if that was your intention, but I just want more of that laid back lazy feel ...let it continue!!! 

Best wishes

Flossie