My favorite line:
You've messed me up so perfectly
FAIR WARNING
I'm very difficult to please when it comes to lyrics. I see a lot of room for improvement here. I won't go super in depth because I'm typing on a phone, which I find laborious and slow. And I can't dictate instead of typing. Too many people talking around me.
The first three lines may be a bit predictable, but I still like them as they are. I find the 4th line too "weak", for want of a better word. I might say something like "And my heart began to bloom".
The next two lines I would probably change a little. Maybe something like...
What was it that you did to me?
I am stunned beyond belief.
The next two lines I like. And I would change the last line of the first verse to something like "From that moment you had me". Kind of predictable but I think it flows better. There is most likely something better than that, too.
That's all I have energy for at the moment. Plus I don't want to get too carried away as you may not care for my suggestions so I wouldn't want to burden you with a super lengthy version of them.
If you like anything here, feel free to use it. If not just ignore it.
Best wishes for your efforts with this song. I hope I get a chance to hear the final product.
Vicki