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Title: Streets
Post by: Sullish on June 01, 2020, 10:36:05 PM

Not my usual type of effort but wanted to try something different.

https://soundcloud.com/sullivancomish/streets

Title: Re: Streets
Post by: IronKnee on June 02, 2020, 07:27:33 AM

Hey there........I really like the metro feel about this. Feels like a great road song.
Love the atmosphere. Very easy listening, and not too busy.
Great relaxing piece.
Kudos,
                       -Tom

Title: Re: Streets
Post by: moraamarolaloba on June 02, 2020, 11:26:51 AM

Hola @Sulish

I like the cadence of your song, it takes you walking through those streets... I do not understand all the lyrics because it is not my language but yes the sense of the story.

Title: Re: Streets
Post by: Grubstar on June 07, 2020, 02:32:24 PM

Hi I really liked the electronic backing and synth work and  you've also got a great voice, this could be the basis for a great song but at the moment it is too sparse  both lyrically and melodically for my tastes.

Title: Re: Streets
Post by: Jamie on June 10, 2020, 01:41:02 PM

Hi, this has some very good elements, like the guitar tone and the synths. The vocal is good to but it's a bit repetitive (the streets etc). I think this could be a very good song, but needs a bit of variation and and additional lyric imho!

Cheers
Jamie