Do you need a lie down? You seem agitated, can I get you a tissue?
The angry tone really comes through nicely and the over all message is pretty relatable. I feel like it could benefit from having a repeatable chorus though. Something like,
Fight! Blah blah blah blah
Fight! Blah blah blah blah
Fight! Blah blah blah blah
Fight! Blah Fight! Blah Fight!
A song like this meant to stir anger and point out things that should be upsetting, gain a lot from a chant or slogan like chorus. Something to carry the overall message the song is intending. Just a thought.
"But if the system isn't broke then
what the fuck is?"
Oooh, that is good. I like that, that was nicely put.
Overall it's fairly ranty and the rhymes and flow aren't always spot on. It could use some editing and tinkering I think to iron out the wrinkles. All in all though I really liked it.
Cheers