hey guys
thought I would try to use the forum to help with a bit of writing..
I've been working on a song the past couple of weeks and today I've been trying to get the intro into some kind of interesting...thing..
Anyway, recorded it so I could get your opinion. Its a v. short intro so I played it twice...
Aswell as the intro its gonna be the break between verses etc..I.e. the main 'hook', if you will...
My may concerns are - is it catchy, unique? Is the melody clearly defined or is it all a jumble? Does it leave you wanting to hear the rest of the song, or boring?
The song itself is gonna be a kind of duet between our 2 singers, we are thinking of closing gigs with it..I spent ages working out how to play it while keeping a nice rhythm going and its a bit of b*tch to play, so sorry for mistakes (not got it down yet...)
http://snd.sc/XVKByN