This is great. Your guitar playing and voice are full of hooks. Do you have an idea of what you would like a professional to improve - are we talking additional instrumentation? Maybe a small bit of bass could do something on the chorus, possibly doubling the voice melody - might not work, just an idea, and it's important to state that this version is excellent as it is, it has enough variation to be continually interesting.
Lyrically, political songs aren't my thing, but you have a wealth of pointed images here and I like that you manage to come across as frustrated and worried rather than preachy. I didn't quite get 'everybody must hate fun', but loved 'damned if we don't and damaged if we do'.