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@CaliaMoko I think this is my first post in the Lyrics forum. I read them and I found them most interesting, I liked the concept, and I've done a few things lately that were recorded years ago and then I've revisited through an older pair of ears, so I kind of understand the feeling, maybe a cross between deja vu and a flashback.
Anyway...no nits (as you say) no criticism...just ideas....(and by the way I'm into prosody too, i didn't know it until I just looked up what it meant)
Is there some way you can wrap it up with the 3 title words together, something like..
Are you allowed to use words that sound the same like wrest?
I'm trapped by hunger and from it I need to wrest
This feeling that I've grown to know the best,
so now I need to set go rest.hope this helps
Rich