2 Lines Each
"Secluded and Reserved"
Don't know if there's any motive for this on the forum, but I always find this stuff quite cool so why not?
Rules
2 Lines Each (per week)
Be as creative as you can!
Don't worry about what you put, it's just a bit of fun!
The End Result?
I'm thinking we could put the end result up in the Collaboration League (http://www.songwriterforum.co.uk/index.php?topic=11878.0) so anyone can make use if they'd like a crack at making a song from it (and license to tweak)
Complete Song
(I've started us off with a 2-line introduction)
Intro
She was secluded and reserved,
Such a curious creature...
ScottLevi
Verse 1
She was lonely undeserved
You just wanted to meet her
pompeyjazz
Sitting at the bar alone
Fiddling with her mobile phone
CaliaMoko
Chorus
Mobile communications feed my integrations
Upon the hub of lost perennial shores
boolio
A Mona Lisa smile that was my interpretation
or maybe she's a rebel but has she got a cause.
tomcrocus
Verse 2
She broke into a smile
As she made her connection
GuyBarry
Sitting at the bar with style
She had grabbed his attention
diademgrove
Bridge
My feeling grew
So I changed my direction
Boydie
Mumbled of last suppers
and hoped for a resurrection
delb0y
Verse 3
She threw glances like seductive spores.
Adulteration, excitation then bedroom doors.
johnlondon
Strictly my preserve
Secluded and reserved for me
Neil C
Outro
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User
So, anyone up for it?