[little feet]

i love these lyrics. i was thinking about them earlier today. what i was thinking was how they might be even more powerful in first person. i know you said this isn't from personal experience.. but it seems like a missed trick if you don't at least try it. walk a mile in his shoes.

[diademgrove]

Hi Caco,

I had a different vision in my mind. I thought the protagonist was the man responsible for the domestic violence who had decided to leave and commit suicide on the long road to heaven.

Great words.

diadem